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Old 03-13-05, 05:17 PM   #9
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this was pretty easy, heres what i see

cinema man, i dunno what the fuck your doing, but 4 was stupid shit man, no hate, but you dont take breaks in battles, that means your a pussy....plus, your punches were weak, you had one nice one, the disease one, that was your best line, all else was played or weak, so you need to elevate your punches and personals...also your vocab and wordplay, get a good vocab and it will help with your punches, and your wording in some areas coulda been better to elevate the punches.......but you had good flow, structure was good cept for that one line.........but you didnt win this battle

Slobk....not the best from you, didnt really have anything that stood out that much, but your punches were decent, had more personals.....and your vocab/wordplay were great, helped flow your verse more and added to your punches, so thats why your getting my vote....but still, some stuff was weak in there man, but you have better stuff, so, keep up yo......this was a one sided battle.......

v/slobk.......hit up a link in my sig....word
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