Alright this is just feedback due to me being in CS even though im barly active but gotta keep up on the topica/poetry battles to see the comp. along with the fam....

Bab- your piece was very strong... the vocab wasnt really spectacular but it doesnt really need to be in every piece... your structure was very well put together and your imagery was good aswell... your emotion was strong and the imagery you had painted a vivid picture in my mind... nice drop man


Mista- your piece was good aswell... the first thing i noticed is that you went freeverse style on your topical... alota cats dont like that but me being a poet and usually having freeverse that is what i usually do in topicals aswell... but yeah your piece was pretty solid aswell... your emotion lacked a little bit but your imagery was good aswell/... structure was solid and everything else just work on the emotion and most close battles like this if you go freeverse cats look down on that for some reason cause they stupid and dont really get why we do it...

but yeah both of you dropped good... bab i got you next kid..