Voted For: 9th Degree

haha, this was good, heres what i see

whyte-out....not bad, thought some of your punches/personls were played and weak...you had a few good ones, but overall, 9th had more. i have to say, reading your verse was very had, i suggest not using white font, or make it bigger....but other than that, strucutre was okay, flow was a little off in places though, tune that up a little.....vocab can be upped, and i thought some lines were worded a little crappy, so wordplay should be upped too.....like your last line, it flowed poorly, and took away effectiveness from your punch, plus its played anyways....so, overall, not a bad verse, but i dont think you came that hard with it

9th....aight, structure a little sloppy in this one, same with flow....but you had the harder disses, personals were great, funny as hell....."your dope" line, that was good.....you had good vocab and wordplay, which is good to have to make verse alot better to read, opener was okay, coulda been worded better the first line.....but overall, you came harder, had better punches/personals, not much creativity, but you kept consistent in dissin him, and it was a well written verse

v/9th degree

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