this is going to be a close battle i figure, both came out with nice verses

id vote, but i can't so i'll leave some feed....this was an interesting topic, and both of you took different approaches....babylon, not bad man, i thought your verse had more emotion, but lacked vocab and wordplay, and some flow was kinda off in some places, but you made up for it in emotion and imagery, that was pretty kickin............mista, nice drop, although its hard gettin use to your rhyme scheme, you get a really good picture built up in your head when reading, didnt think you had as much emotion in your as babylon's, but you definately had nice vocab/wordplay, and especially towards the end, you could really feel passion in your writing......yeah, so, good drop by both....gl to you both

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