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Old 03-13-05, 10:23 PM   #12
metaman
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Voted For: Invektive

heres how i saw this battle:

structure: this category goes to invektive... nice flow, good rhyme scheme, consistent... kid, your structure was off... try to keep your lines the same length, that'll help...

vocab: invektive gets this on the count of using more creative vocabulary and incorporating it well into his verse and keepin a decent flow

punches: invektive's definitely hit harder... not much wordplay, but good personals and aight metas... kid you gotta elevate this part of your game if you wanna battle... punches were weak, no wordplay or personals, and paper mache was the only attempt at a meta, and it was kinda weak

overall: this was an easy win for invektive for those reasons i outlined above, no hate jus elevate

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