Voted For: ~Babylon~

Mista:
Your verse was really confusing at frirst..but after reading it for a while i saw it was just a different style.. your verse was good but you really didn'dt have enough imagery in my point of view.. It was hard to understand it at first.. but i also couldn't feel emotion in ur verse.. your strucutre was alright..but structure doesn't really matter..but im a topical you should always have good flow to make it easier to understand..

Babylon: Your verse was very basic man.. i've sseen alot better from you before. Hopefully in VE you come alot harder.. but yeah.. i could feel you emotion in this verse and I could picture the images in my head alotot better..but ur vocab wassn't as good as i'd expect so work on that also..

vopte: Babylon

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