My Dick Stay Wet
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This was feedback posted for MiSta_AuTh3nTiQ
IP:
mista i think it woulda helped more if you rhymed a lil more....but ur imagery was good and the detail u gave waz good.....your vocab was nice..your verse stayed together like on topic....i woulda approached da topic another way but the way u did it was more interestin....keep it up
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