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Old 03-14-05, 12:20 AM   #12
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Voted For: 9th Degree

win here even though every single line was played... the fact they were played doesn't take away that they were punches with wordplay... unlike this other cats
Challenging was a half-baked idea, but you're about to get done
'Cuz the closest you'll be to 9 is your losses before this one
^^played concept but best bar of battle

whyte-

I spit straight fire, and ill leave ur body wit "9th Degree" burns,
U step out of line wit me homie, i will teach ur ass so u can learn
^^i've seen people say that same line agianst this cat before. and second one itn't a punch
Ur failing to win in dis battle like teachin sign language in braille,*
Leave u like Earnheardt, "Died A Lap Early" and callin u D.A.L.E.
^^first line is dumb cuz they still read with braille so thats just a confusing and dumb metaphor, second line is attempt at wordplay or sumin but its dumb, but stilla punch so not too bad
Ill connect wit a couple low blows, then hit u up wit a upper cut,
Leave ur ass laid out flat on ur back, now i can say i own u slut
^^^called 'em a slut... wow good job waste a bar callin someone a slut... anyone can do that.
Homie your flow doesn't effect me like u was a cool summer breeze
Da reason you 9th degree is cuz 9 degrees is as hot as u'll ever be
^^agian seen this agiasnt 'em before but prolly your best bar in ya verse

you still lose because none of ya shit really hit hard and most of your wordplay was dumb shit. and the lines that were good were played.
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