Thread: phive vs Da UFC
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Old 03-14-05, 01:02 AM   #23
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This was feedback posted for Da UFC

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da-aiight you got this battle...........you had more personals than phive and your punches were wittier.............also you got some creative lines............although you self glorified a lil i still believe you beat him.........you flow wasnt that great you def got beat on that part..........your structure was perfect..............pretty good job.........no vocab tho....up that and your multis cuz multies=flow

phive-your structure was horrible man................you had really good flow due to the ammount of multies.......but you lacked in throwin personals and more direct punches..............you had pretty decent vocab also..........but like i said you lacked in directing your punches...some were good but some werent............and work on personals..............but fix up ya structure and ya punches/personals and you'll start winnin
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