Voted For: Indeph

wow...............this was a great topical.

countree-alright you had a pretty solid drop.........you had imagry which is needed.....lol....but the pictures i got from it were on point.......you had pretty good flow........you had okay structure even tho topicals i dont think it should matter..........your vocab was kinda basic.......you need to elevate on that some......work on more multi's to help your flow out more.........you had good rhyme scheme and good emotion.....i felt more emotion towards the end which made your verse more interesting.......you had a solid drop but indeph had a better verse

indeph-aiight fam your verse was off the chain........i like how you got creative and chose to write about each setting........and the fact that you added true meanign in it about the celebs gettin off easy and shit.......madd creative...........your verse had some emotion....not much but like countree it was more towars the end.....cuz in yours it didnt start to get more personal till the end.......your structure was good........your flow.........wow where to start.......it was amazing.....your multi usage was awesome......you were alwyas good a flowin..........your vocab was beter than countree's and your imagry was there throughout your verse so it made it better.......you just had a nice verse.........

good job the both of you.......keep it up

v/indeph

*can but dont have to rtf*

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