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Old 03-14-05, 08:51 AM   #9
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Soc: aight your quality was aight, even though it wasnt great
it was alot better than the first audio you put out, your lyrics we're
alright some punches stood out and others were like really?...NEXT!!!
ya know for the most part you could of come harder especially when
dealing with a experienced audio cat...your delivery was eh...
the pauses really hurt you it was like you left me hanging for more
but hurt your verse, stop using the text head thinking this is audio
i use to jam pack words in one line but would run out of breath
like your doing...shorten that shit and get to the point....


Triple N:

was aight some parts ya fell off others you were right there
lyrics were better thank socs....some made me chuckle
chorus killed it your quality was better but you needed to up your
vocals a little i had to turn my headphones up to hear it on some parts
overall you had a stronger verse.....slightly better lyrics
your delivery made your verse better than socs also you had a more
entertaining flow.........

Vote: Triple N
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