not too difficult to vote on this one. kesse jus seems more experienced than chowie, and knows what wins battles. kesse had better structure, punchz, flow and personals.

chowie you jus need practice and a bit of direction against yer opponent...its ok to use filler (shit about what yer goin to do to your opponent or about yourself) as long as you also have some punchz (dis's to your opponent). even better if you can include some personals. finally, yer need to sort out yer structure so its more obvious where one line ends and tha next starts..makes it easier for people to read whatcha rhyming.

shit that was some long-ass feedback. now someone vote on mah battle vs phive!


argh..i typed all that and then realised i haven't enuff posts to vote!!! call this shit feedback, k

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