Voted For: Kesse

pic-alright you had an okay verse......pretty good with the personals......but they just werent THAT great.....you shoulda made them wittier and added a punch along with it......you had decent flow and you had better vocab than kesse...your structure was a flaw definately.....you had some short lines and some stretched......work on that........you need to work on your punches as well......GAY JOKES ARE PLAYED OUT so yeah remember that.....so overall your verse gets a 4/10

kesse-alright yo had a pretty decent drop.....better than pic...alright you came with wittier and more thought out verses.......your punches added some humor which we all like to see......your structure was your biggest flaw i'd say...work on that some......your flow was alright add some more multi's in there and your set but yeah also up your vocab some......its not always needed in amounts but....if you added more this would be a better verse......ima have to say you get a 6.5/10

v/kesse
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