I walk & walk over you
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Voted For: Untraceable
Untraceable-Wow!, Good verse mane. The emotion was good and pure, i felt the narrator in this peice. Even though you didn't rhyme much in places, i think it flowed good mane. Creativity was decent. Vocab was good and you use them pretty well, cause some of the topical heads i battle use the word in a "wrong sentence" But you man, used it pretty well. Imaginary was Good, keep it up.
Flow-Pretty good verse mane. A little bit of lacking in the emotion. Great flow. The imaginary was good i could actually see in my mind with your words. Vocab was decent and used correctly.
Overall=This is an hard battle here, but i'mma vote. Untracable great verse with emotion and imaginary. Flow Intelligent good verse with imaginary but you a little bit lacked in emotion and i felted untracable emotion came harder than your's so that's why i'm voting for untracable.
Pz
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