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Old 03-14-05, 04:12 PM   #14
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Originally Posted by Dabatos
im listening to it right now
The beat is pretty good.. lol no offense..but it sounds like there's something in ur nose.. your chorus is okay.. but it really ain't that catchy... Your on the beat.. but your flow isn't really consistent.. its on flow then not on flow.. but your lyrics are pretty good but seems a lil basic.. well thats just for me.. cuz i've thought of alot of rhymes already.. this isn't te best song i've heard so far.. and isn't the worst.. one thing that will really help your song is the quality.. so that you should work on too
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i agree with most of this.......flow is a little shakey.......lyrics seem basic....quality is also a little blahh......at least the beat is good......this just isnt one of your better songs.....keep writin 1
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