it was not 2 good but just keep workin' at it cuz it'z ur 1st piece u continue 2 elevate as time goes by...structure was off...vocab was ight need elevation...& overall was ight u will come alot betta next time i know u will 6.5/10
also make sure 2 return the favor in my battle: http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=180742