Voted For: PoEtIc~ViZiOnZ

nice drops to both..
poetic.. i see you use a differ style and thats good.. cuz its different from others and actually explains alot better and shows good imagery.. nice job.. the only thing u should work on is your vocah..thats about it..

heat.. your verse lacked imagery.. your vocab was on point but couldn't imagine wut u wrote. but nice metaphor refering to your rap... also.. work on ur flow man..its like the lines are strecthed..

vote.. poetic

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