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Old 03-14-05, 07:38 PM   #13
Ca'lam
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aight i heard Soc's first - quality is blehish... first part is kinda wack.. after the "intermition" shit was pretty aight.. ya delivery was aight.. i favored your flow better than triples in this battle.. but his delivery was alot better... lyrics was aiiighht.. you had filler, and then you had about 2 bars that really stood out from the battle... ya delivery REALLY brought you down.. cause you could have had it if ya delivery was on oint with ya cadence.. but youw as takking breaths and shit and missing the beat cause you breathed in the wrong places and shit.. but it was aiight overall.. good job.. you got a good flow, write ya lyrics aroudn your delivery abilities.. cause you writing and u dont have enuff air for it all..

triple - i thought the flow was a little mechanical on this.. u fell off a few times.. but overall it was a pretty strong delivery.. lyrics were also aight.. none that really stood out.. you had 2-3 ones i was feelin.. the hook fuckin set it off tho lmao.. alergic to cooch lmao.... overall, i think experience wins over this battle.. ya flow was more enjoyable because your cadence and delivery was better.. lyrics were aroudn the same level as soc.. but ya delivery made you have a more enjoyable and stonger battle track.. the beat you used was ill also .. quality always good..



vote: triple
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