Originally Posted by Wet Willy

wow this piece was pretty nice.. dabatos you pretty much came fire the whole way thru.. nice flow by both.. lyrical content was nice.. but again mista your rhyme scheme just doesnt sound good.. thats good for a poem.. but an Open Mic.. it just doesnt really fit well.. i told u this before but i guess u liek it.. it makes u original so its all good.. nice piece guys.. pz..