Voted For: ~High-Dro~

This was one of the best verses i seen from phive but he was totally outdone in this. Il break it down bar-by-bar:

open: Phive's was alrite, seemed quite basic, no wordply, multis, or metaphor used but a good punch. High-Dro's opener smashed it up! Really nice metaphor to make a great personal punch that hit hard. 1st Bar: High-Dro

Middle bar: Phives was cool, better than the opener. Good punch, nicely done. High-Dro had a nice metaphor but the punch wasnt hitting as hard and didnt come off too well. Middle Bar: Phive

Closer: Phive attempted mutlis here i think which i wasnt feeing at all. In my opinion your closer wasnt good, phive, the punch sucked. High-Dro had a quality closer which clinched it for him. Well worded punchline, with good set-up. Nice goings high-dro took it. Closer: High-Dro

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