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Old 03-15-05, 08:31 AM   #1
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Black Poet
 
Posts: 1,474
From: London
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Voted For: One M.B.

Alright very nice drops by both but, OMB takes this
one,...

OMB,.. Shit man where should I begin, Vocab on point
strong vocab all the way I like this bar...

stainin the floors with the blood of my soul
crimson rainbows, nothin that a love can resolve <dame>
deep emotions,.. Vocab on point and gave me a clear
vision of what was in his mind.

Flow was on point, as well as the emotions very nice
drop man.

Effect come nice but I felt that your verse was to
basic to win this battle. I wasn't very emotional. Flowed
really well and good vocab was used at times.
This was a very good attempt man so just keep writing
and u will get there.

Stay up both

Vote ~ OMB