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Voted For: Young Blaze

YOung Blaze- you had a good verse . i jus thought u should work on your structure a bit.. i know that it prolly fit when u typed it up but the boxes are screwy like that.. o ver all you had alot of good and creative punches... i liked your vocab.. .. you could work on your punches a little more but over all you had alot of good aspects in your rhymes... o yea i liked ur state farm line.

Phive- you need alot of work... change your structure... don't talk about guns and knifes unless they are used in a metaphor.. some of your stuff was really played and i thought that you could work on your punches and personals alot more. work on your vocab.... go read a page out of a dictionary.. why don't you join the crew "First Floor" their a good elevation crew and they will help you with your spits

Vote//Young Blaze

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