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Voted For: Invektive

Invektive- you had a nice verse.. shit how do u fit so much into one verse? ha .. but over al you had some really good punches..."i hate to tarnish your image man...i know your heart might be sore
do us all a favor and leave RapVerse.com..we would like you more" haha that was jus mean.. but i liked it none the less but yea youhad better metas and a better structure.. nice verse

Kid 523 -You need alot of work... work on your structure and your punches... fix your your vocab. and think about your shit mroe when you are writing it .. come join first floor we will help you elevate alot.. but over all you reallly need work .. you didn't really have rhymes and you need to work on your vocab..come and join first floor you need the help...

Vote//Invektive

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