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Old 03-15-05, 11:50 AM   #20
A_M_H
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Voted For: Young Blaze

this battle was very confusing & hard 2 read 4 me:
young blaze- ight, let's c ur punches were ok..a few
played out lines..work on ur wordplay..it
flowed ok in certain areas at times..multis
were a few..meta's were good

sr. royal_t- ok ur opener seemed forced..ur punches
were played out..wordplay needs work also..
it was not a consistent flow in ur verse..u
had a couple of multi's..meta's ur not there

overall- young blaze & royal_t need 2 work on ur
structure..verses need serious elevation..but
both verses were ok 4 newbies tho

make sure 2 return the favor in this battle:
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=180963