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Old 03-15-05, 02:36 PM   #26
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Voted For: Premanition

Prem- i thought you had a very nice verse. you had alot of good multi's and punches. your personals are nice... you had alot of good vocab .. and you used what u had and proved why your a "Vet".. you had a good structure and your flow was on key. over all a very nice drop

Karm- your structure was off which made the flow sorta off. you had your punches but they werent as strong or witty as prem's. you really need to work on your vocab it was just really to basic...so over all up your vocab and work on your punches...

Vote//Prem- over all i'll go with prem because he really had a much better more organized verse. his vocab and punches were better thats why he is getting my vote

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