Voted For: Evolution

lets see

non.....thought you had some nice stuff in there, your getting better man, but overall, your opener killed you, pretty played and weak, your closer was good, but evolution had better stuff....your structure, okay, i dunno about all those dots your using, kinda looks stupid, but your flow was good, no problem there, up your vocab a little, it was kinda low, wordplay was decent.....you didnt really have any personals in there, so try and get those in next time

evolution, pretty solid verse man, thought every bar hit pretty hard....this was a creative verse, not too complex, but it was effective, flow and structure were bang on....nothing special with vocab....wordplay was decent, so overall, you had harder punches, you had personals in your verse, and thats why your getting my vote......

v/evolution

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