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Voted For: PoEtIc~ViZiOnZ
Poetic- i thought that you took this one with ease.you had better vocab all around and your structure was more organized. i thought that you had alot of good aspects like there was good imagery and alot of good emotion in this....
Heat.- you had an alright drop.. i jus thought you lacked in the honesty and emotion part... you could have done alot more with your drop. your vocab was good.. your structutre wasn't as appealing as P's but overall you had a nice drop
Vote//PoEtIc~ViZiOnZ--i voted for PV for having a better drop all around .. better vocab better structure better message
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