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Voted For: Cinema
Cinema
Nice Lines, I Thought You Had A Nice Opener Man, Vocabulary Was Flawless, Nice Punches Man, The Personals Oh Hell Now, Got Em' Coz, Wordplay Alright Didn't Dig It Much, But Meta's Whoa! Yo Coz You Nice, Punches And Personals Got You This Battle Though, Your Opener Was Mad Nice, But Your Closer Was Nicer, Try Working On Structure Though Man Weerd
Ghoste
Alright Verse Man You Vocabulary Wasn't To Good, Your Punches Was Pretty Decent Bruh, Structure Erm, Try And Change It up Man And Don't Use The "//" It Makes Your Verse Look SLoppy, Just Line Up The Bars Man, Personals Na I Wasn't Feeling Em, Overall I Think You Need To Elevate On Your Flow A Little Man
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Peace
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