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Old 03-15-05, 07:05 PM   #17
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hate 2 b honest, but my rhymes is like "Scissors" ur shits like "Paper"
....listen, you beat'n me is like a midget jump'n over a skyscraper
that was a hot bar

.......i'm like a lyrical "chainsaw" ........i'll cut your verse in half
......your style is like the "Dice"........its not even worth a laugh
good one nice diss

Your "Punches" is like a "Bitch Slap"no "Pain" jus a "Quiet Smack"
..."Evolution" the only thing you evolving from is lame.to str8 wack

ha good ending hard punches good diss and a great finish good drop fam nicely done we need to talk word up








This kid’s a newb, cuz it seems that you lack of a damn location
You on my level? You’re not even close to the steps of elevation
just flowing

He’s just another damn bitch…who practically likes to face newbies
Your still unknown kid...cuz all of RV...is saying “wait who is he?”
just flowing no punch

I’ll fake-hit this bitch hea, and then jab his ass with my right
I mean, you can only make your punches hot if they were this bright
what the hell is all this about? conceed it flows are lame why u talking about ya-self in a battle? thats where u went wrong

Look kid, your not going to take this battle, this is for real, no hate
Mayn all your other battles are wack, well, all I can say is
jus elevate

bad ending i wasnt feeling this verse at all no hit just flowing about ya-self about how good u is which dont help at all only once u is establish maybe but u'r not so this was a real bad verse plez dont do this again