Voted For: Effect

One Man Band
hmm i thought you did pretty good nice imagery great syllable count, great imagery, nice vocab but the stucture got fucked up on one line but thats not really a biggie, the emotion was ight, could be alot better tho...but overal good verse, a little minor things that could have been better but its all pretty good

effect:
alot better, elevation has gotten alot better, emotion is something you dont have man its a key thing but blah OMB didnt have much anyway...vocabulary was alot better then OMB's Imagery was flawless i was really feeling your imagery, stucutre was pretty damn good and the flow great syllable count keep doin your thang you getten better. pz