Voted For: MiSta_AuTh3nTiQ

very very nice battle and good shit from both

emotion- ~Babylon~, mainly because of the ending...the ending was really good, the emotion was ok throughout the whole story but the ending made it stand out a lot i liked it, mista i wasnt feelin any emotion throughout your piece and it looked like you tried to add some in your ending but i didnt like the ending...it didnt feel described good enough and it didnt have a twist as much as babylons but good shit

imagery- Mista, very good imagery there was a lot more shit described that could make you see shit good...babylon i didnt sense a lot just some good emotion and the imagery like "blood gushed out" was good but i felt mista had a lot more no hate

last aspect i feel is the way you told the story and how unique it is, and i feel mista won this aspect, it was more unique he made it like an animal and the descriptiveness of it made it stand out more so he did his thing and the way he told the story was real good, no hate to babylon good luck to both though

peace

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