this was ok...i dont really like a whole lot of gun play in lyrics unless its completely witty...so this didnt fit my style that much at all....i wasnt feelin parts of yalls structure...how you made 1 line a bar...instead of it being 2 lines....kind of confusing...vocab wasnt really all there...topic just didnt fit me well...thats all...use more multies, wordplay type stuff if your gonna use a lot of gunplay...it makes it a whole lot more interesting to read if wittyness is added to it....just keep droppin open mics and elevating...stay up

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