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Voted For: ~High-Dro~
yep, heres what i see
meta4....i dunno man, your punches are very weak....most of em seem like fillers...no creative wordplay at all, sorry, but its true, there was nothing really interesting in your verse at all,,, first bar wasnt bad, but the rest just dragged on....lot of played shit....structure and flow were ok though, but you lacked in dissin the opponent and thats what you gotta do, but your shit was just whack....no offense, but you gotta come harder next time
hy dro....probly the best ive read from you, uhh, the flew like an eagle line was blahh, didnt really fit your verse, but everything else was pretty creative....had nice plays on his name.....but matadors dont really fight with swords (they're the guys with the capes), but thats alright, you had great flow, easy to read, wordplay and vocab, nothing special, but decent....personals were what made the difference, your punch wasnt that good, but you were consistent and had hitting personals and meta didnt have either....so, you get my vote
v/hydro
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