Voted For: Forgotten Flow

this was so hard to judge...

Ling: you locked the whole thoughts
approach, you had nice imagery... so
much emotion was felt. the lines were
the shortest ive seen since provoke. you
had a nice layout, you came through with
the Topical... every word fit , had nice flow
the struct made it so easy to read line to
line, however i wasnt really feeling the
style, i liked the way you wrote just the
feel, but i wanted a background image of
the whole thing as well, still dope.. nice.

forgotten: wow, the words spoke to me,
i feel like this has happened to me with
a different effect. you have nice style, but
i think your bars are a little stretched, tone
them down a little, other than that your
imagery was hot, your flow was decent. the
overrall image was easy to picture in my
mind. wisely approached, you came with a
background image and i liked that. its not
nessecary but it helps to clarify the motif of
the topical youve exposed through your
eyes. word? nice job done here...

vote/ forgotten

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