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Old 03-16-05, 01:36 AM   #13
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Voted For: Drama Queen

one of the best ive read, lately....
reminds me of the lyric days.

Darkness surrounding the room, trapped inside this shadow
Craving to escape life's misery but she's glad though
Now that she has found a way to reconcile with her past
By making sure there's no future to build the contrast
Laying in the bed where spine-tingling highs were once felt
Where a blessing or curse was made and the cards were dealt


most def my favorite lines of the battle, these lines killed it. i invisioned the whole run up, while i was reading, nice piece girl... i love the whole read. you have the greatest style in the world, im jocking your structure.
your imagery killed em, have any more open? word i wanna read. nice pieces to both, but DQ brought the A game.

v/ DQ
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