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Voted For: Drama Queen
wow......nice topic here
gold-aiight you gave a lot of imagry in your drop.....the flow was flowing but couldve been better...your vocab wasnt too bad but it sutited your verse......i thought your drop was very good infact i read your twice just to see if i liked it better......but there was very little emotion in your drop.....which kinda effected the outcome of my vote.....i felt you came at the topic kinda simple i mean it was good it just coulda been conveyed in a different way.....but it was a good drop keep it up
drama-aiight your verse was just soo crazy.....your flow was very good.....i liked your vocab usage like golden it suited your verse.......which there wasnt too much or too little but close to just enough......your imagry was amazing....i really liked how you threw the reader around with her thoughts then all the sudden like i thought it was a child wanting to commit suicide but it was a mother....which was a nice twist.....then like you didnt stray off topic cuz you talked about blood then a tooth fallin out....lol...it was good.....your emotion in this was intense i really felt it was a major aspect of your drop...which stood out more...i just felt your verse was conveyed beautifully.....good job..and keep it up girl
good drop both of you...
v/drama queen
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