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Voted For: final
wow this was a good piece... both came very hard.. i really liked this, both of urs flow was good.. untrace you fell of at points. also the emotion and imagery were nice i was feeling final's just a tad bit more.. untraceable your verse was fire... the only things i thought u were a bit off on were the over used vocab.. i hate it. i mean hate it when vocab is overused .. it just makes ur topical sound to stiff.. also i didnt like the fact that on points your flow was off.. as to where final's flow was on point the whole way thru as well as his emotion and imagery.. so no hate vote goes to Final
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