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Old 03-16-05, 05:13 PM   #2
Wet Willy
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Voted For: Indeph

wow indeph got this.. countree i wish you woulda had ur original verse cause im sure it was fire.. but like ur structure and flow were way off.. u were neither here or there.. indeph you came with a different view on this topic and really came the way i woulda done it.. not too much vocab makes it sound shitty.. just an overall good story good emotion and good imagery.. CounTREE i think u coulda go this if ur flow and structure were there.. but Indeph got u on this one..
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