Voted For: AssAsInS-eVolve!

wow, i think you guys need only one word........ELEVATION, not to be harsh or anything, but this was really bad

structure....speats, you had a decent one, but your flow sucked ass cause your wordplay was garbage, gotta get more creative with your shit, none of your punches hit, seemed like they were all fillers, sorry, you had the right idea for personals, but your vocab and wordplay was poorly done, and you just couldnt connect them, sorry man, but you gotta elevate.....you did have good structure, so play off that....dont worry, only way to go is up....word

assassin, your structure...where was it, and your lines were huge, then small, then huge again, dont do that.....it flowed decent, but work on structure, alot.....im giving you this vote because you had punches that landed, they were stretched and worded poorly, but you had the only effective ones.....but you still need to elevate alot

v/assassins evolve.....no hating here, this was honest....rtf if you could with an honest explained vote

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