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Old 03-16-05, 06:09 PM   #11
LyricalMa$tamind
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This was feedback posted for SpeatsBeats

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SpeatsBeats
Considare this a movie,im the good,your the ennemie
Like always,the good wins and then everybody's happy/ WEAK OPENER
The monster had been created on april 27 1988*
its why March 14th is the date,this is your last day/ mmmmm?
I didnt use a beat for this,i closed my eyes for this**
You so none important,youd be featured last in a generic/?
I saw some battles from this dude,battlin him is almost rude
Dont battle me if your wack,stick with your wack ass crew***
Murder Mook would murder himself knowing you know him*
U wished as christmas gift a pac full of good lyrics
The only one evolve in assassin's death would be me bitch/Weak Closure

Speats-no punches at opponent
weak rhymes
good structure, but no elevation
work on elevatin homie n u b iight
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