Voted For: metaman

metaman
IP:


imma slay-this-dude Phive for he done played-the-fool
get ill is the way-i-do Prescribe eight-more-noobs
to Battle first before you go steppin-ta-me
only Handle dicks fag i been checkin-yo-streak
five is how many battles you lost at one Time
four da number of wack lines in yo two bar Rhymes
three are the noobs that done faced ya ta get their Shine*
two are the slugs you gon catch when you face my Nine
one is the L you'll get when homeys see these Lines
no one here respects you dog you ain't see dem Signs
u got merked dude if kiss saw this he ain't ask Why

NICE, NICE, NICE
like all da punches u got on ur opponent
good structure, nice elevation, hard rhymes

Phive
cudda been betta
more elevation
better structure
try more punchs at opponent

my v/metaman

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