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Old 03-16-05, 07:28 PM   #9
LyricalMa$tamind
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Throwdest
..The teks in my hand like built up frustation AMH 'Hold In Violence'
& i'm 'Sniping Public Speakers' cuz i get the '[E]thikal 2 result 2 Tyrant
..U awoke a giant, A's knives 'Penetrate Ur Surface Like Cleats'
& have ya 'MIA' like 'Dwaine Wade' ur 'Chest Holdin The Heat'
i'm neva folding 2 the weak, i speak unique havin ya destiny fall
cuz even if 'I-Peek-At-Chu' i'd still b 'Kicking Poke Balls'!..
..dude will poke & crawl & try a 'Stall' like 'New York City Cabs'
cuz i'm put more 'Numbers 2 [E]thik' then he already has!!..
..that's 2 bad, like Allstar specials i'm the 'Sophmore Killin The Rookies'
cuz this 'Shaq-In-The-Wnba' cuz i'm constantly 'Postin-Up-On-Pussies' /LOL
Great Funny Ending
Nice hard punches
good structure
great elevation
8.5/10

Ethiks
dawg check ya verse, cuz im rippin ya facts.
even michael (jackson) is stoppin ya shit, with his dick in ya ass./ Al right
ya lines on hold, dont even fight for votes.
either ya shy or choked, cuz it took you all night to post.
wether you like this joke, take this advice i'd hope.
Da_Throwdest, i'll leavin you lookin just like this ho./ Pretty Good
dont be scared to get embarressed, ya disguise wont help.
though life itself is heaven, then ya lines is hell.
despite ya health, ya cant jock a kat like myself. /heh?
i'll put my bars in my pants, so you can ride my wealth./ IIGHT

Iight rhymes
not 2 many punches thrown, get mo punches in dere
iiight structure
average elevation work on elevatin mo n u b iight
7.5/10

my v/throwdest
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