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Old 03-16-05, 10:36 PM   #6
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Originally Posted by FlOw InTeLLiGeNt
i have to dissagree with chaos here...

hood dawg since the last piece of yours that i left feedback on you got alot better.. look at your lines they were actually dope lol.. good wordplay there too. Got ya structure and flow on point and them first 4 lines were just sick. Really feelin ya shit now. LFS your verse wasnt up to par as the rest of yours but definately a good read keep droppin shit ill keep leaving feedback. Dope piece

8.5/10


yo thanx for the feed yo...keep it flowin
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