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Old 03-17-05, 09:53 AM   #30
GlocKoma
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Voted For: A_M_H

Sounds like ya always on the balls of that boy Yukmouth
U remind me of a wack mc from the north, not the south

Umm... Ok Personal... Hella Simple Though...

I’ll give u blue eyes to match the orlando magics jersey
U’ll be at the hospital wit doctors puttin u to sleep for ya surgery

First Line Was Blah... Second Doesn't Punch...

Ur skill aint colorful cuz ur the total opposite of the rainbow
Stop trying to be the whore of rap to earn money at a show

Rainbow = Gay... Second Line Didn't Punch...

every punch u used failed to connect like lego blocks
my punch is like thunder, can u feel the pain of the shocks?

Lego Blocks CONNECT... And No... It's Lightning That Shocks Mother Fucker... Plus It's Self Hype So It's Irrelevant Anyway...

Overall - Pretty Weak... Didn't Really Throw Any Punches... Simplistic Verse... Hardly Any Multies Or Inside Rhyming... 2.5/10...

U got me laughin' & u beatin' me Just-Ain't-Happening
this must b christmas mourning, cuz i'm Tearin-Open-(W)rapping

Played... And Self Hype...

divorce ya skull so ur brain & bone ain't In-Line
slap this "Toy Solider" backwards & end "Affinities" like steppin' on Land-Mines

Cool... Nice Wordplay...

having the nerve 2 battle me? U've-Lost-It-Fool
ur rhymes r Full-Of-Chorline just like The-Neighborhood-Swimming-Pool

LoL... Funny, But What Does Chlorine Have To Do With Anything..?

open up ya heart when ur Chests-Shot
watch as i fry "Toy-Story-Katz" similar 2 "Vietnamese-Restaurants"

Aight... Cool Wordplay...

Spineless-Bastard! i've must have Broke-Ya-Back
i'm not dope..i'm weed? well then i'ma Smoke-This-Wack

Umm... No...

this kid bite's audios as if he had "Rabbies"**
put ur face in a frame, like the duke in ur Avy

Irrelevant...

Overall - This Waz Aight... Some Shyt Was Irrelevant And Didn't Make Sense, But You Had Wordplay And Multies... And Some Ok Punches... 6.5/10

Vote - A_M_H... Due To A More Complex Verse... Complex Rhyme Scheme... Not To Mention Wordplay And He Through Some Punches... Nameplays...
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