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Old 03-17-05, 10:36 AM   #15
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Voted For: J DOT

dayum this shit was pretty hot fam..i was feelin the grindin line..your structure is pretty dope..and your flow was dope and good multi's good wordplay.....this shit was pretty hot i was feelin it...very good personals. 7.5/10

whyte: your shit was wayyy too basic....punches was the only thing you sorta had goin for u..ur structure was ok..flow was ok..punches was blah;...personals...not many..overall this shit was aiight.i gave you a 6/10

j dot took this with better structure..flow..punches..personals
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