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Old 03-17-05, 01:21 PM   #38
TAKENOTICE
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Voted For: Blackmage

all your words are like a cancer patients dying breath repentence cause in every verse you Only Spit 1 Really Ill Sentence(spells os1ris)
rapverse needs to check how did you even get admittance

i love this bar for what reason i don't know it just fits well i would break it down it on just so onesided to me
blackmage got this for all around better structure rimescheme and general punches and wordplay...

os1ris you need to step up you rime scheme was way off point and your closer theres no need to tell everyone thats your finisher ...
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