It cut my family so deep…the scar left was so severe
Everybody broken and cryin, I’m bein strong not sheddin tears
I know it's o.k. for men to cry but, I’ll do it on my own time
Cuz right now my family needs me…life ain’t seemin sublime

^I can definately relate to this because when my grandpa died I couldn't cry until few months after his death

I enjoyed reading this drop, the emotion was the strongest aspect of your piece and the imagery was good as well. Found a good balance with your vocab, it was suitable for the topic and you kept it quite simple to really focus on the content of your verse. I like how you managed to write down your emotions on such a sensitive topic. Good going man!

DQ

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