Odi et Amo
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I really loved the concept of your poem, good creative thinking on this one. Found a nice balance with your vocab, not too basic but not too complicated either and it was suited for the content of your poem. Strong aspects were emotion and imagery for sure, the different levels in your poem, the way you worded certain things made me stop and think about it. Really good job!
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