decent i dont see the point of coming at me tho. a couple bars didnt line. your one bar was stretched as fuck. and you shouldnt try using big words you cant spell, it killed the flow. Thats what people dont understand fuck using big words they kill the flow the structure and definately the syllables, How the fuck somsone gonna have a 30 syllable line lol. Anyways decent piece

7/10

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