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Old 03-17-05, 04:00 PM   #33
Kamikazee
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From: C-Town
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Voted For: Aurora

Yo i Think Aurora got dis one hands down good shit homie here is how im going to break it down......



you in the lowest seeding, you can't even define the meaning
why should we let u win? are we running out of human beings?
Dis was iight flowed good.......6/10
we all connect man...the chance of your konquest is real slim
no he doesn't have any enemy...cause all his friends hate him
Yo was good in da first line but didnt make sence in da 2nd......5/10
don't be messing with me, my defense multiplied as it fortified
see thats why his career never blossom...until it parished & die
Dis was a pretty good punchline here....7/10
his verse doesn't really start...until it had reached the footer
he has a large winning mouth...pity everything else is a loser
Dis was fire right here best line.....8/10
I think you wack...inspite your amazingly different inner light
I know heads had called you a wit...believe me they're half right!
Dis was a pretty decent line 2......7/10
kid feather weight...yet he must be those fat kids, I mean well
he looks like he's got a ghost writer with him...than I realised it's him himself
Dis really didnt rhyme.....5/10
Overall:38/60




Blah......... X back for verses to eat and spit...rip, flip,homie look at yourself........twist you far worse than the Exorcist
Dis would have been FIRE if u wouldnt have put homie on da end of da 1st line cuz homie and Exorcist dont rhyme......5/10
Ima trap your radiated lines as if "electrical" didnt exist in rays
now the kats under the knife has had his nuts to be spade.....
Dis was a good line......7/10
the way america wuz discovered by Christopher Colombus
kid u lack to rap, wack at rap,still zags his pants ,kiss my ass
Dis wasnt dat good......5/10
beatin me is like Shady wuz witout the Aftermath........Blah
the kid misses "light" and lacks to deliver the Punches
DIDNT RHYME......5/10
Overall:22/40

X-Cell i think u didnt come hard enough some of ur stff didnt even rhyme......u could be pretty good wit a little more elevation and help on rhyming....no hate.....Pz
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